Why USA interfere other country's problem?
At first, i tell you i'm neither pro-americanism nor anti-americanism My mother country is Korea. USA government is afraid of South Korea and North Korea to be unify as one, because that will make my country extremely powerful, without knowing that unification is Korean nation's No.1 hope. So they're doing best to stop us and also fearing the growth of China that will take over USA and lead itself a strongest, so they're also doing best to stop its being. They don't let Japan and South Korea to possess nuclear even if they have like thousand of em. There was accident the one of USA soldier was driving tanks and it cross over two high-school girls and they don't even apology and one of US soldier in Japan raped the girls and barely apologies. After World War 1, people felt the taste of tragic result produced by pursuit of its own benefit. And decided to built pacifist organization that called United Nation. But once again USA, France, and England negotiated with Japan and Germany and only stood for disarmament of defeated countries. That's why World War 2 has occured again. Why USA is the most powerful and influential country and keep causing problems all over the world and provoking nations to revolt against itself. Japan keeps proclaming the part of territory of Korea is to be in Japan's territory. But Korea has kept that for more than 5 millions of year. To us it sounds really non-sense. But Japan gave tons of money to USA and USA anounced it is Japan's territory. Barely, George Bush stopped this after he gets back from visiting other country. But our nations were extremely angry against USA althrough USA helps us in Korean war. I think USA government is being really selfish. They pretend to help us but actually they keep try to stop our achivement. I want to have your opinion thanks well doesn't want to be unifiy by North Korea but us
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Because we are the world police. lol JK. I don't know.
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The position of US imperialism is undermined both by the world capitalist crisis, whose center is located precisely in the US, as well as by the military reverses in Iraq and Afghanistan. Imperialist antagonisms and rivalries are intensifying. But this does not imply that a new capitalist superpower could replace US as world hegemon: American capitalism represents the highest point of the historical development of world capitalism and of its decline. Humanity is still confronted with the volcanic eruptions of a declining US capitalism which cannot find any internal equilibrium without establishing a new world equilibrium under its supremacy. We are very happy, we love all this mess in the World! The explosion in the foundations of the system is driving the tectonic plates of society changing all social relations and international relations. A way out from the impasse can be opened only through a series of historic confrontations between the conflicting social forces, first of all, between capital and labor. In other words, the solution of the crisis depends, at the last instance, from the confrontation between social revolution and counter-revolution on an international scale. The central task of the international working class and of its vanguard is the urgent political, programmatic, organizational preparation by all theoretical and practical means for this confrontation.
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read a history book written by someone who's not sympathetic to communism and terrorists and you might find your answer
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Sugar sack, don't flatter your ignorant worthless self, I don't give a toss if one Korea blows the other one off the map or vice versa. Stick to what you know cooking and eating dogs and stay the Hell out of what REAL people do and think. You don't matter, we look right through you.
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Your delusional, We would LOVE if NK and SK joined forces, then our ALLY SK, could control NK..... You need to read a book
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Edit: Why DOES THE USA interfere IN other country's problems? You aren't making any sense. Don't you remember the American soldiers that saved South Korea from Communist intervention in the 1950's? That tried to unify Korea under a democratic government in that same war? We have spent billions upon billions to protect Japan and South Korea, while you both have not had to spend on any sort of formidable military. WE are paying for your defense, without which you would be easily destroyed by the North Koreans. Do you want a Korea unified under a tyrant and a maniac?
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Why other countries want US handout, then hate us?
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Because we want to make sure people in other countries are safe and have opportunities that Americans have, that's what makes us a great nation.
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I think you need to quit listening to Communist propaganda. You know nothing about the USA from your comments,and you also know nothing about your own country. South Korea doesn't want to be unified with North Korea. I hope Japan bombs North Korea off the face of the map.
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Well I tell you, America is my country! That trumps your mother ******* country all the time!
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You are a confused person Do you know that north Korea invaded the south Would you want to live as the north Koreans live? Do you know that the south asked the U S to help them There are many Christians in your country do you think the north would allow them to follow their belief I've have spent time in your country I would say you are very young and very foolish Do you really think Korea or china well surpass the U S Do you really think China well allow Korea to be a powerful country ? Your an American kid and you really have no right to live in our country with that crap attitude you have I would say your mother and father worked very hard to get to this country and have worked very hard while they were here you must be a big disappointment to them You have shamed your family
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Obviously you have your opinion about how Americans feel about this. I can tell you they are not as involved as you think. Most Americans couldn't care less about Korea except they know that's wher there car came from. I on the other hand feel it is important to understand the dangers involved with North Korea. If Korea unified today it would be an ugly scene. It would be like Dr. Jekyl marring Mr Hyde. The 2 could not work together bcause communism always seeks to control and dominate people and resources. The only reason America is involved is because of the danger it poses to it's allies and interests.
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The USA isn't afraid South Korea and North Korea would unite. Under Bush we strengthened our relationship with South Korea even further. They do not want Kim Jong's form of government. We also strengthened ties with Japan. No one is claiming South Korea, although China is most definitely strong-arming North Korea. What you have to look at is how the governments have evolved over the last 50 years or more. It is always good to have strong ties & allies. South Korea isn't going to turn it's nose up, when they have an immediate threat to the north. The USA is supporting Korean achievement. In addition, were you aware that we sent more aid to North Korea during their famine, than any other nation? How is that selfish? We are supporting the people, and promoting democracy.
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yeah and entered Iraq to free it from Iraqis .. yeah killing more than a 1'000'000 innocent iraqi and kill the president and his sons to brought peace to Iraq .. peace .. what a funny reason.
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States generally intefere into the affairs of other states as they are all inter-connected. States do not live isolated, they are all connected, so a political decision 8500 miles away can affect your life and that of your family, wherever you live.
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actually i saw that Lee Mun Bak's predecessor (you know the former SK president who tragically committed suicide recently) asked Bush in front of cameras, "When will South & North Korea be reunited?" Bush was silent and did not answer. So i don't think you're "confused." you being Korean probably know more about Korean history than the numbnuts in this country who seem to know everything, but screw everything up you're young so i'll explain it like this: I work for Nike, so I want to sell shoes to everyone the US is the world's largest arm exporter, so they want to sell as many weapons to everyone as they can. so it is important for the US to destabilize the world as much as possible to as many weapons to as many nations and rebel groups.
Sunday, April 28, 2013
Sunday, April 14, 2013
CREATIVE PEOPLE!!!! HEADLINES/TITLES???? PLEASE HELP!!!!!! QUICK!!?
CREATIVE PEOPLE!!!! HEADLINES/TITLES???? PLEASE HELP!!!!!! QUICK!!?
Can you make 10 headlines about he following: Even just a few would help!! Spread of Independence Korean War African Independence Vietnam War Communist Revolution in Cuba Terrorist Attacks (Spetemeber 11, 2001) Here's some info. if you need it: Spread of Independence Between 1945 and 1962, many nations in Asia and Africa achieved freedom from Western influence. After WWII, many Jews returned to Israel, their Jewish homeland. Palestinian Arabs resisted this “invasion.†In 1947, the United Nations voted for separate Jewish and Palestinian states. War ensued almost immediately between Arabs and Israelis. Israel won and expanded the borders into Arab held land. Thousands of Palestinians became refugees. There have been numerous wars and intermittent peace in this region since the establishment of Israel. Korean War After WWII, Korea was divided at the 38th parallel line. The Soviet Union occupied the north and the United States had troops in the south. North Korea became a communist nation called the Democratic People’s Republic. South Korea became a democratic nation called the Republic of Korea. In 1950, North Korean troops invaded South Korea. The United Nations sent troops, mostly from the United States, to intervene and help defend South Korea. Chinese troops joined the North Koreans. The UN troops forced the Koreans and the Chinese back behind the 38th parallel. In 1953, an armistice was signed by both sides. African Independence By 1980, almost all African countries became free from European rule. Libya and Egypt were both independent by 1952. In 1957, Ghana, led by Kwame Nkrumah, became the first Sub-Saharan African country to gain independence. This inspired the Kikuyus of Kenya, led by Jomo Kenyatta, to gain independence from Britain in 1963. Although South Africa gained independence from Britain in 1934, the fight against apartheid, or racial separation, was ongoing. Under the pressure of western nations, apartheid was reformed and eventually outlawed in 1994. Vietnam War The Vietnam War was one of the most controversial conflicts in the history of America. In the early 1950s, the French fought to gain back control of Vietnam and were defeated in 1954. The war between Vietnam and France was called the First IndoChina War. The Geneva Accords were the peace negotiations following France's defeat. The agreement split Vietnam into North Vietnam and South Vietnam. Ho Chi Minh, the leader of North Vietnam, wanted Vietnam to be united and independent of outside control. He wanted it to be a communist-ruled country. The United States supported South Vietnam, a non-communist nation, with troops and money to avoid the spread of communism. American troops began arriving in Vietnam in 1961. At that time, the troops were called "advisors" and were not intended to be in combat. Year after year, more and more American troops were sent to Vietnam. In 1973, the U.S. withdrew troops after a cease-fire agreement was signed. The North Vietnamese troops took over South Vietnam completely by 1975 and formed the Socialist Republic of Vietnam in 1976. Communist Revolution in Cuba In 1959, Fidel Castro led a revolution against the Cuban dictator, Fulgencio Bautista, and set up a communist government. A communist nation aligned with the Soviet Union, just 90 miles off the coast of Florida, made American leaders uneasy. The U.S. involvement in the Bay of Pigs Invasion in 1961 and the Cuban Missile Crisis in 1962 were results of this tension. Terrorist Attacks On September 11, 2001 members of the terrorist group al-Qaeda, hijacked 4 passenger jets. Two jets were intentionally crashed into the Twin Towers of the World Trade Center in New York City, one into the Pentagon in Washington D.C. and the fourth crashed in Pennsylvania. Approximately 3000 people died. The U.S. government then led the War on Terrorism. Afghanistan and Iraq were deemed the heart of terrorist activity and the United States invaded. The United States Department of Homeland Security was formed to coordinate counter-terrorism activities. The USA Patriot Act was also enacted to enhance law enforcement investigatory tools, and to deter and punish terrorist acts in the U.S. and around the world. THANKS SO MUCH!!!! 10 POINTS FOR THE BEST ANSWER!!! :)
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Terror in the Twin Towers Cuba Communism to Crash Sorry only 2 I could think of, hope it helps!
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Independence is achieved as Jews succeed in forming state of Israel Clash between Jews and Palestinians leave Middle East in Turmoil In the wake of a Cease Fire US troops in Vietnam Withdraw In parts of Africa Racial Seperation Casts a Black cloud over recent independence In Africa Racial Seperation reform comes slow but steady to win the race
Can you make 10 headlines about he following: Even just a few would help!! Spread of Independence Korean War African Independence Vietnam War Communist Revolution in Cuba Terrorist Attacks (Spetemeber 11, 2001) Here's some info. if you need it: Spread of Independence Between 1945 and 1962, many nations in Asia and Africa achieved freedom from Western influence. After WWII, many Jews returned to Israel, their Jewish homeland. Palestinian Arabs resisted this “invasion.†In 1947, the United Nations voted for separate Jewish and Palestinian states. War ensued almost immediately between Arabs and Israelis. Israel won and expanded the borders into Arab held land. Thousands of Palestinians became refugees. There have been numerous wars and intermittent peace in this region since the establishment of Israel. Korean War After WWII, Korea was divided at the 38th parallel line. The Soviet Union occupied the north and the United States had troops in the south. North Korea became a communist nation called the Democratic People’s Republic. South Korea became a democratic nation called the Republic of Korea. In 1950, North Korean troops invaded South Korea. The United Nations sent troops, mostly from the United States, to intervene and help defend South Korea. Chinese troops joined the North Koreans. The UN troops forced the Koreans and the Chinese back behind the 38th parallel. In 1953, an armistice was signed by both sides. African Independence By 1980, almost all African countries became free from European rule. Libya and Egypt were both independent by 1952. In 1957, Ghana, led by Kwame Nkrumah, became the first Sub-Saharan African country to gain independence. This inspired the Kikuyus of Kenya, led by Jomo Kenyatta, to gain independence from Britain in 1963. Although South Africa gained independence from Britain in 1934, the fight against apartheid, or racial separation, was ongoing. Under the pressure of western nations, apartheid was reformed and eventually outlawed in 1994. Vietnam War The Vietnam War was one of the most controversial conflicts in the history of America. In the early 1950s, the French fought to gain back control of Vietnam and were defeated in 1954. The war between Vietnam and France was called the First IndoChina War. The Geneva Accords were the peace negotiations following France's defeat. The agreement split Vietnam into North Vietnam and South Vietnam. Ho Chi Minh, the leader of North Vietnam, wanted Vietnam to be united and independent of outside control. He wanted it to be a communist-ruled country. The United States supported South Vietnam, a non-communist nation, with troops and money to avoid the spread of communism. American troops began arriving in Vietnam in 1961. At that time, the troops were called "advisors" and were not intended to be in combat. Year after year, more and more American troops were sent to Vietnam. In 1973, the U.S. withdrew troops after a cease-fire agreement was signed. The North Vietnamese troops took over South Vietnam completely by 1975 and formed the Socialist Republic of Vietnam in 1976. Communist Revolution in Cuba In 1959, Fidel Castro led a revolution against the Cuban dictator, Fulgencio Bautista, and set up a communist government. A communist nation aligned with the Soviet Union, just 90 miles off the coast of Florida, made American leaders uneasy. The U.S. involvement in the Bay of Pigs Invasion in 1961 and the Cuban Missile Crisis in 1962 were results of this tension. Terrorist Attacks On September 11, 2001 members of the terrorist group al-Qaeda, hijacked 4 passenger jets. Two jets were intentionally crashed into the Twin Towers of the World Trade Center in New York City, one into the Pentagon in Washington D.C. and the fourth crashed in Pennsylvania. Approximately 3000 people died. The U.S. government then led the War on Terrorism. Afghanistan and Iraq were deemed the heart of terrorist activity and the United States invaded. The United States Department of Homeland Security was formed to coordinate counter-terrorism activities. The USA Patriot Act was also enacted to enhance law enforcement investigatory tools, and to deter and punish terrorist acts in the U.S. and around the world. THANKS SO MUCH!!!! 10 POINTS FOR THE BEST ANSWER!!! :)
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Terror in the Twin Towers Cuba Communism to Crash Sorry only 2 I could think of, hope it helps!
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Independence is achieved as Jews succeed in forming state of Israel Clash between Jews and Palestinians leave Middle East in Turmoil In the wake of a Cease Fire US troops in Vietnam Withdraw In parts of Africa Racial Seperation Casts a Black cloud over recent independence In Africa Racial Seperation reform comes slow but steady to win the race
Sunday, April 7, 2013
Could you read my essay and revise my grammar errors?
Could you read my essay and revise my grammar errors?
While people are living in their lives, they face moments to make decisions that may affect their lives such as going to college, getting married, and having a baby. I'd like to tell you about a decision which my uncle made. My uncle, David, 58-year-old, worked for the U.S army for 28years. Now, he works at the post office as a mailman. He is one of cleverest men I've ever met. He is a good advisor. When I have a problem, he usually gives me some good advises and suggestions which is really helpful. He was born in a little town in Nothern Indiana named London. He grew up in a good family. His father, John, was a doctor who likes to help others. He's always looking for works that can help people, and his mother, Marry, was a housewife. They have four children. Two of them are from John Marry. The other tow are adopted. Marry died about five months ago when she was 88years old. I only met John once. He really liked to tell us the stories. When I first saw him, he showed me a couple of pictures of my uncle's. Then, he told me the stories about my uncle's childhood such as what he was like, he like to do, and etc. According to his memories, my uncle was one of the smartest students in his school. Most his grades were "A" and he recived many prizes. So he went to the Cornell university. However, somehow, going to university was very hard for him. His major was engineering.But, for some reason, he did not fit in the school. He started not to go to classes. He realized that he needs a change. He wanted to do something else besides going to school. Suddenly, he quit the school himself and he decided to join the U.S army. That is when he was 21years old. After three years he became a soldier, he was sent to South Korea as an instructor. In 1970s, a few decades after Korean War, Korea was still a poor country. People even from other countries did not know the existence of Korea. Most people did not have enough money to buy food and educate their kids. However, he faced his happiest moment in his life. He met his wife, Ji- hyun, my aunt, in his unit. She was 23 years old, and she was a banker. They've been dated for 2years. After dating for 2 years, they got married in Korea. But, my uncle said it was hard to marry a korean woman because my grandfather was against the marrige with a foreigner. They moved back to the United States. They invited my grandparent and all of my uncles to the U.S to have a better life.They've been married for 34years now. They have two sons. The older one, Daniel, works for the FBI, and he is getting married on July with a lovely woman, who is a lawyer. The younger one, michal, quit the high school when he was 18years old, but he works at the bank with his mom. My uncle has been working at the post office for 6 years now, and he loves his job. Fortunetely, he made a right decision. If he did not make the decision to join the army, he would not be here now, and he would not be able to meet his wife. He said " sometimes, I regret that I've made a wrong decision. But qutting school, and joining the army were best decisions I've made. I learned a lot of things from the army. Also I met my good friends, and they made me a strong person". He said he is happy now, and I could see he is happy while he was telling me a his story. I'm not a native speaker, so I'm having a hard time with writing an essay. Would you plz read my essay and check my grammar errors?? Also plz check commas and revise it. I'll appreciate if you give me some suggestions that could help me to develop this essay. Thank you :)
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There comes a chance when people living their lives have to face decisions that will affect their entire existence, such as - going to college, getting married, and having a baby. I'd like to tell you about a decision which my uncle made. My uncle, David, a 58-year-old, worked for the U.S army for 28 years. Now he works at the post office as a mailman. He is one of the most intelligent men I've ever met and is good at giving advices. When I have problems, he usually gives me some good opinions and suggestions which are really helpful. He was born in a little town, in Northern Indiana, called London. He grew up in a good family. His father, John, was a doctor who likes to help others. He's always looking for work that can help people, and his mother, Marry, was a housewife. They had four children. Two of them were biological while the other two were adopted. Marry died about five months ago, she was 88 years old. I've met John only once. He really liked to tell us the stories. When I first saw him, he showed me a couple of pictures of my uncle. He told me stories about my uncle's childhood such as what he used to like to do and etc. According to his memories, my uncle was one of the smartest students in his school. Most of his grades were "A" and he received a lot of awards. So then, he went to the Cornell University. However, attending the university was very hard for him and his was majoring in engineering. Because for some reason, he did not fit in school. Uncle David stopped going to his classes, when he realized he needed a change. He wanted to do something else aside from going to school. When he was 21, he chose to quit the school himself and decided to join the U.S army. After three years, he became a soldier and was sent to South Korea as an instructor. In the 1970s, a few decades after the Korean War, Korea was still a poor country. People from other countries did not even know the existence of Korea. Most Koreans did not have enough money to buy food and educate their kids. Nevertheless, he gained the happiest moment of his life in Korea. He met his wife, Ji-hyun, my aunt, in his unit. She was 23 years old, and was a banker. They've dated for 2 years, and got married in Korea. But my uncle said it was hard to marry a Korean woman due to my grandfather’s indignant treatment towards marriage with a foreigner. They moved back to the United States and invited my grandparents and all of my uncles to the U.S to have a better life. They've been married for 34 years now and had two sons. The first born, Daniel, works for the FBI, and he is getting married on July with a lovely woman, who’s a lawyer. The younger one, Michal, quit high school when he was 18 years old, but he works at the bank with his mom now. My uncle has been working at the post office for 6 years now, and he loves his job. Fortunately, he made the right decision for himself. If he did not decided to join the army, he would not be here now, and he would not have met his wife. He said, “Sometimes, I regret that I've made such a decision. But quitting school and joining the army were the best decisions I've ever made. I learned a lot of things from the army. Also I met my good friends, and they made me turn into a strong person." He said he is very happy now, and I could see that he certainly is happy while telling me his very own story.
While people are living in their lives, they face moments to make decisions that may affect their lives such as going to college, getting married, and having a baby. I'd like to tell you about a decision which my uncle made. My uncle, David, 58-year-old, worked for the U.S army for 28years. Now, he works at the post office as a mailman. He is one of cleverest men I've ever met. He is a good advisor. When I have a problem, he usually gives me some good advises and suggestions which is really helpful. He was born in a little town in Nothern Indiana named London. He grew up in a good family. His father, John, was a doctor who likes to help others. He's always looking for works that can help people, and his mother, Marry, was a housewife. They have four children. Two of them are from John Marry. The other tow are adopted. Marry died about five months ago when she was 88years old. I only met John once. He really liked to tell us the stories. When I first saw him, he showed me a couple of pictures of my uncle's. Then, he told me the stories about my uncle's childhood such as what he was like, he like to do, and etc. According to his memories, my uncle was one of the smartest students in his school. Most his grades were "A" and he recived many prizes. So he went to the Cornell university. However, somehow, going to university was very hard for him. His major was engineering.But, for some reason, he did not fit in the school. He started not to go to classes. He realized that he needs a change. He wanted to do something else besides going to school. Suddenly, he quit the school himself and he decided to join the U.S army. That is when he was 21years old. After three years he became a soldier, he was sent to South Korea as an instructor. In 1970s, a few decades after Korean War, Korea was still a poor country. People even from other countries did not know the existence of Korea. Most people did not have enough money to buy food and educate their kids. However, he faced his happiest moment in his life. He met his wife, Ji- hyun, my aunt, in his unit. She was 23 years old, and she was a banker. They've been dated for 2years. After dating for 2 years, they got married in Korea. But, my uncle said it was hard to marry a korean woman because my grandfather was against the marrige with a foreigner. They moved back to the United States. They invited my grandparent and all of my uncles to the U.S to have a better life.They've been married for 34years now. They have two sons. The older one, Daniel, works for the FBI, and he is getting married on July with a lovely woman, who is a lawyer. The younger one, michal, quit the high school when he was 18years old, but he works at the bank with his mom. My uncle has been working at the post office for 6 years now, and he loves his job. Fortunetely, he made a right decision. If he did not make the decision to join the army, he would not be here now, and he would not be able to meet his wife. He said " sometimes, I regret that I've made a wrong decision. But qutting school, and joining the army were best decisions I've made. I learned a lot of things from the army. Also I met my good friends, and they made me a strong person". He said he is happy now, and I could see he is happy while he was telling me a his story. I'm not a native speaker, so I'm having a hard time with writing an essay. Would you plz read my essay and check my grammar errors?? Also plz check commas and revise it. I'll appreciate if you give me some suggestions that could help me to develop this essay. Thank you :)
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There comes a chance when people living their lives have to face decisions that will affect their entire existence, such as - going to college, getting married, and having a baby. I'd like to tell you about a decision which my uncle made. My uncle, David, a 58-year-old, worked for the U.S army for 28 years. Now he works at the post office as a mailman. He is one of the most intelligent men I've ever met and is good at giving advices. When I have problems, he usually gives me some good opinions and suggestions which are really helpful. He was born in a little town, in Northern Indiana, called London. He grew up in a good family. His father, John, was a doctor who likes to help others. He's always looking for work that can help people, and his mother, Marry, was a housewife. They had four children. Two of them were biological while the other two were adopted. Marry died about five months ago, she was 88 years old. I've met John only once. He really liked to tell us the stories. When I first saw him, he showed me a couple of pictures of my uncle. He told me stories about my uncle's childhood such as what he used to like to do and etc. According to his memories, my uncle was one of the smartest students in his school. Most of his grades were "A" and he received a lot of awards. So then, he went to the Cornell University. However, attending the university was very hard for him and his was majoring in engineering. Because for some reason, he did not fit in school. Uncle David stopped going to his classes, when he realized he needed a change. He wanted to do something else aside from going to school. When he was 21, he chose to quit the school himself and decided to join the U.S army. After three years, he became a soldier and was sent to South Korea as an instructor. In the 1970s, a few decades after the Korean War, Korea was still a poor country. People from other countries did not even know the existence of Korea. Most Koreans did not have enough money to buy food and educate their kids. Nevertheless, he gained the happiest moment of his life in Korea. He met his wife, Ji-hyun, my aunt, in his unit. She was 23 years old, and was a banker. They've dated for 2 years, and got married in Korea. But my uncle said it was hard to marry a Korean woman due to my grandfather’s indignant treatment towards marriage with a foreigner. They moved back to the United States and invited my grandparents and all of my uncles to the U.S to have a better life. They've been married for 34 years now and had two sons. The first born, Daniel, works for the FBI, and he is getting married on July with a lovely woman, who’s a lawyer. The younger one, Michal, quit high school when he was 18 years old, but he works at the bank with his mom now. My uncle has been working at the post office for 6 years now, and he loves his job. Fortunately, he made the right decision for himself. If he did not decided to join the army, he would not be here now, and he would not have met his wife. He said, “Sometimes, I regret that I've made such a decision. But quitting school and joining the army were the best decisions I've ever made. I learned a lot of things from the army. Also I met my good friends, and they made me turn into a strong person." He said he is very happy now, and I could see that he certainly is happy while telling me his very own story.
Monday, April 1, 2013
would you read my essay and revise my grammar errors?
would you read my essay and revise my grammar errors?
While people are living in their lives, they face moments to make decisions that may affect their lives such as going to college, getting married, and having a baby. I'd like to tell you about a decision which my uncle made. My uncle, David, 58-year-old, worked for the U.S army for 28years. Now, he works at the post office as a mailman. He is one of cleverest men I've ever met. He is a good advisor. When I have a problem, he usually gives me some good advises and suggestions which is really helpful. He was born in a little town in Nothern Indiana named London. He grew up in a good family. His father, John, was a doctor who likes to help others. He's always looking for works that can help people, and his mother, Marry, was a housewife. They have four children. Two of them are from John Marry. The other tow are adopted. Marry died about five months ago when she was 88years old. I only met John once. He really liked to tell us the stories. When I first saw him, he showed me a couple of pictures of my uncle's. Then, he told me the stories about my uncle's childhood such as what he was like, he like to do, and etc. According to his memories, my uncle was one of the smartest students in his school. Most his grades were "A" and he recived many prizes. So he went to the Cornell university. However, somehow, going to university was very hard for him. His major was engineering.But, for some reason, he did not fit in the school. He started not to go to classes. He realized that he needs a change. He wanted to do something else besides going to school. Suddenly, he quit the school himself and he decided to join the U.S army. That is when he was 21years old. After three years he became a soldier, he was sent to South Korea as an instructor. In 1970s, a few decades after Korean War, Korea was still a poor country. People even from other countries did not know the existence of Korea. Most people did not have enough money to buy food and educate their kids. However, he faced his happiest moment in his life. He met his wife, Ji- hyun, my aunt, in his unit. She was 23 years old, and she was a banker. They've been dated for 2years. After dating for 2 years, they got married in Korea. But, my uncle said it was hard to marry a korean woman because my grandfather was against the marrige with a foreigner. They moved back to the United States. They invited my grandparent and all of my uncles to the U.S to have a better life.They've been married for 34years now. They have two sons. The older one, Daniel, works for the FBI, and he is getting married on July with a lovely woman, who is a lawyer. The younger one, michal, quit the high school when he was 18years old, but he works at the bank with his mom. My uncle has been working at the post office for 6 years now, and he loves his job. Fortunetely, he made a right decision. If he did not make the decision to join the army, he would not be here now, and he would not be able to meet his wife. He said " sometimes, I regret that I've made a wrong decision. But qutting school, and joining the army were best decisions I've made. I learned a lot of things from the army. Also I met my good friends, and they made me a strong person". He said he is happy now, and I could see he is happy while he was telling me a his story. I'm not a native speaker, so I'm having a hard time with writing an essay. Would you plz read my essay and check my grammar errors?? Also plz check commas and revise it. I'll appreciate if you give me some suggestions that could help me to develop this essay. Thank you :)
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The 2nd paragraph: Cleverest isn't a word.. Smartest is. Last paragraph: Fortunately He said, "Sometimes...... But quiting school" aand I could see he was happy while he was telling me his story. Gosh.
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Have you seen the movie "17 Again"?if not then you should watch it'll help you a lot!because the movie talks about a man who is similar to your uncle Go on Wikipedia or something research website but you can watch at http://onlinefreemoviesstream.blogspot.com/2009/02/watch-17-again-2009-online-free-stream.html Good Luck
While people are living in their lives, they face moments to make decisions that may affect their lives such as going to college, getting married, and having a baby. I'd like to tell you about a decision which my uncle made. My uncle, David, 58-year-old, worked for the U.S army for 28years. Now, he works at the post office as a mailman. He is one of cleverest men I've ever met. He is a good advisor. When I have a problem, he usually gives me some good advises and suggestions which is really helpful. He was born in a little town in Nothern Indiana named London. He grew up in a good family. His father, John, was a doctor who likes to help others. He's always looking for works that can help people, and his mother, Marry, was a housewife. They have four children. Two of them are from John Marry. The other tow are adopted. Marry died about five months ago when she was 88years old. I only met John once. He really liked to tell us the stories. When I first saw him, he showed me a couple of pictures of my uncle's. Then, he told me the stories about my uncle's childhood such as what he was like, he like to do, and etc. According to his memories, my uncle was one of the smartest students in his school. Most his grades were "A" and he recived many prizes. So he went to the Cornell university. However, somehow, going to university was very hard for him. His major was engineering.But, for some reason, he did not fit in the school. He started not to go to classes. He realized that he needs a change. He wanted to do something else besides going to school. Suddenly, he quit the school himself and he decided to join the U.S army. That is when he was 21years old. After three years he became a soldier, he was sent to South Korea as an instructor. In 1970s, a few decades after Korean War, Korea was still a poor country. People even from other countries did not know the existence of Korea. Most people did not have enough money to buy food and educate their kids. However, he faced his happiest moment in his life. He met his wife, Ji- hyun, my aunt, in his unit. She was 23 years old, and she was a banker. They've been dated for 2years. After dating for 2 years, they got married in Korea. But, my uncle said it was hard to marry a korean woman because my grandfather was against the marrige with a foreigner. They moved back to the United States. They invited my grandparent and all of my uncles to the U.S to have a better life.They've been married for 34years now. They have two sons. The older one, Daniel, works for the FBI, and he is getting married on July with a lovely woman, who is a lawyer. The younger one, michal, quit the high school when he was 18years old, but he works at the bank with his mom. My uncle has been working at the post office for 6 years now, and he loves his job. Fortunetely, he made a right decision. If he did not make the decision to join the army, he would not be here now, and he would not be able to meet his wife. He said " sometimes, I regret that I've made a wrong decision. But qutting school, and joining the army were best decisions I've made. I learned a lot of things from the army. Also I met my good friends, and they made me a strong person". He said he is happy now, and I could see he is happy while he was telling me a his story. I'm not a native speaker, so I'm having a hard time with writing an essay. Would you plz read my essay and check my grammar errors?? Also plz check commas and revise it. I'll appreciate if you give me some suggestions that could help me to develop this essay. Thank you :)
Homework Help - 2 Answers
Random Answers, Critics, Comments, Opinions :
1 :
The 2nd paragraph: Cleverest isn't a word.. Smartest is. Last paragraph: Fortunately He said, "Sometimes...... But quiting school" aand I could see he was happy while he was telling me his story. Gosh.
2 :
Have you seen the movie "17 Again"?if not then you should watch it'll help you a lot!because the movie talks about a man who is similar to your uncle Go on Wikipedia or something research website but you can watch at http://onlinefreemoviesstream.blogspot.com/2009/02/watch-17-again-2009-online-free-stream.html Good Luck
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